Good.
As good as your last one? Perhaps not. But still, it was very funny, if a little bloody.
The only thing that really annoyed me was your use of semicolons for the dialogue.
Good.
As good as your last one? Perhaps not. But still, it was very funny, if a little bloody.
The only thing that really annoyed me was your use of semicolons for the dialogue.
Sorry about the semicolons, will improve grammar. Thanks for a useful review
I write music. Some good, some bad, some okay. The stuff that I don't find completely sucky can be found here.
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The State of Denial
Joined on 3/4/09